4 c; g. q3 d: r首段 开门见山的主题句子模式。 1 N/ I3 ^ U' Y/ g : f9 A: h8 B9 Y4 y8 b% N, u中间部分，借助一系列的 逻辑关连词，使思路简明清晰！+ Y$ o% }/ F( [
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Television presents a vivid world in front of us. 1 (主题句)Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world. 2 (扩展句)2 G6 g! g' W. L* _3 p" H
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Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life. 3(主题句) For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for people who can not go to formal university. 4(扩展句) For another, children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as “The Animal World”, and “The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald”. 5(扩展句) Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes. 6(扩展句) Furthermore, can learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs. 7 (扩展句) And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercise in some special TV training courses. 8 (扩展句) In short, the effect of TV’s educational role is becoming more and more obvious. 9 (扩展句)' {2 I. b0 Q9 H; c& r, _
" J% A! e W! O+ b/ p, eHaving viewed these aspects, and with many more TV programs produced, I believe that our life will become even more significant. 10 (总结句) 1 x- U8 l/ G& {4 r+ |8 N' W6 v; z% [7 j, a" \, s
点评：本文是一篇典型的十句作文，主题句“Television presents a vivid world in front of us.”点明了文章的主题，其他句子均围绕它为扩展。扩展句（包括实例说明句、观点推导句、过渡句）泛指那些用来解释和支持主题句的陈述语句（句2-9）。结束句（句10）是语篇写作所需要的“结论”，总结性、概括性很强。本篇书面表达的内容要点齐全，上下衔接自然，论据充分，运用了一些较高级的词汇和语句，是一篇欣赏价值较大的优秀范文。作者: ｙｕｅｊｉｎ 时间: 2018-6-24 01:58
点评：本文是一篇典型的十句作文，主题句“Television presents a vivid world in front of us.”点明了文章的主题，其他句子均围绕它为扩展。扩展句（包括实例说明句、观点推导句、过渡句）泛指那些用来解释和支持主题句的陈述语句（句2-9）。结束句（句10）是语篇写作所需要的“结论”，总结性、概括性很强。本篇书面表达的内容要点齐全，上下衔接自然，论据充分，运用了一些较高级的词汇和语句，是一篇欣赏价值较大的优秀范文。